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Look Here First

by Aaryn© Copyright Aaryn. All rights reserved. (95 words)

I keep thinking that I've lost something and for days I will look until I finally give up, figuring that the cracks of theh universe needed it more than I did.
And then I will sit down one day and open up this book and it will fall out, hidden here within two discreet pages all along.
Next time I should remember to look here first because it's always got what I'm looking for and it's full of pleasant surprises.

This book is me, and in it I will find all that I am missing.

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Tim Gulson
25 months ago

I really like this! A neat little idea.

Having said that, I think the last line is a little bit heavy-handed. I get what you're doing, but I don't think the line is necessary at all - you don't need to make the image concrete.

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